MATTER: A Pantoum — Poem analysis

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

What gods do is make and let the pieces fall. Billions of clocks on billions of beaches turning as our hands move however they move or our four legs or six or eight.

Billions of eyes in billions of deserts move through their times or none and we move our two legs or four or six or eight and our hearts and chloroplasts, mycelium,

our many eyes or none. Our structures crystalize, the plates and hearts and chloroplasts and mycelium subduct and bump as we rise and fall.

The structure of our crystals, how the plates and all we do is an echo of clapping hands as we subduct and bump and rise and fall. With voices, silences, wavings of branches

we echo with our hands and twigs and whatever anemones use for voices: silences? wavings of branches? We’re all made of one matter.

Twigs and anemones turn while our hands move however they move because we’re all the matter and making matter and falling is what we do.

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The first line of Mary F. C. Pratt's "Matter: A Pantoum" gives a god's-eye view: "What gods do is make and let the pieces fall." By the last line the gods have disappeared from the grammar, and the same sentence has come down to earth: "making matter and falling is what we do." The poem moves from a divine job description to an ordinary, shared condition. Everything that exists, from people to twigs to anemones, is made of the same stuff and takes part in the same cycle of making and falling apart. Its central idea is that we are not set apart from the rest of nature but are one continuous material, and that "matter" can mean both substance and significance.

Pratt makes this case through a deliberately crowded list of living and nonliving things. Our "four legs or six or eight" sweep in mammals, insects and spiders. "Chloroplasts" bring in plants, "mycelium" fungi, and "anemones" the sea. Then geology cuts across the biology: "crystals" form and "plates / subduct and bump." The poem treats all of these as parts of one body of matter, and "rise and fall" applies equally to a mountain range and a life. The word "bump" is a nice choice here. It is small and almost comic next to "subduct," and it brings continental collision down to the level of everyday clumsiness.

The form carries the argument. A pantoum is built from repetition, with lines recurring from stanza to stanza and the ending looping back to the opening. Pratt follows that pattern loosely, and her repeated lines keep changing as they return. "Billions of clocks on billions of beaches" becomes "Billions of eyes in billions of deserts." "We move our two legs or four or six or eight" is a variation on the earlier line about "four legs or six or eight." The poem even names what it is doing: "all we do is an echo of clapping hands," and a few lines later, "we echo with our hands." An echo is never an exact copy, and the shifting refrains show it. The final stanza does return to the first, echoing both "turning as our hands move however they" and the opening line about gods. But the return is altered, as if the poem had been passed through the world and come back slightly changed.

The sound of the poem is conversational rather than musical. There is no rhyme and no fixed meter, and the lines stretch and stumble. Many end on small, unstressed words such as "they," "and," "we" and "as," so the sentences spill over the line breaks. "Turning as our hands move however they / move" is a good example. The reader is pushed forward the way the poem's creatures are pushed along, without a pause to rest. The repeated "or" ("two legs or four or six or eight," "times or none," "eyes or none") adds a kind of shrugging openness, as though the speaker refuses to count anything out of the list.

The imagery of time and sight is the strangest part. "Billions of clocks on billions of beaches" could be read, judging by the setting, as grains of sand, each one a tiny timekeeper, though the poem leaves it open. The "eyes in deserts" move "through their times or none," which suggests that some beings may not experience time at all. The poem gives no human-centered answer about whose time counts.

The moment that best shows its character is the stanza where the speaker wonders about "whatever anemones use / for voices: silences? wavings of branches?" The colon and the two question marks mark a point of real uncertainty. Here the speaker stops claiming knowledge and just wonders, and the humility is what makes the oneness of matter feel believable instead of preachy. When the statement arrives, "We're all made of one matter," it is short and plain, and it lands because the long, searching lines have led up to it.

The poem is significant because it shows that a restrictive form can express a big idea simply by behaving the way the idea says the world behaves. The repetition, drift and return of the pantoum mirror the cycle of making and falling in the poem's content. By the end, "what gods do" has become "what we do," and the poem has made an old question about human importance feel cheerful and strange.

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