JUST ASKING — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattThanksgiving, 2022Anxious

Why do you keep feeding us? We don’t give you much: a few bones, some onion skins, now and then something like a token of pinecones and twigs or a lanyard we made at camp.

You’re tired, I know. You look tired. And old. All those wrinkles and cracks. And you don’t smell so good, not any more, not even after the rain.

What happened to your jewels— those little birds and buggy things? Are you letting yourself go? I wouldn’t blame you since we don’t seem to care much about how you look, or what you do.

And where would you go? And when we’re hungry, where will we?

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The speaker talks to the earth as if it were an aging, worn-out parent, and the poem slowly makes clear who is really in trouble. The opening question, "Why do you keep feeding us?", sounds almost embarrassed. Humans give back so little: scraps, onion skins, a handmade camp lanyard. The earth, meanwhile, is described like someone who has stopped taking care of herself. She is tired, wrinkled, cracked, and she smells bad. The missing "jewels," the birds and insects, suggest a land losing its living things.

The tone is casual and childlike, even a bit teasing, which makes the guilt land harder. The speaker admits that people don't seem to care how the earth looks or what she does. Then the voice turns anxious. If the earth leaves, "where would you go?" And the last question is the most worrying: "where will we?" The mood moves from awkward politeness to quiet alarm, leaving us with a real fear about what happens when the giver runs out.

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