SHAPE OF SOULS — Poem analysis

That one is crumpled like a scrap of paper she thought she didn’t want, but changed her mind, and salvaged, smoothed out as well as she could.

His is small and bouncy, no one can catch it– it’s slippery, elusive– a transparent glitter-filled superball.

That one is thin, lean, hard, strong, a wing bone. It moves swift, deliberate, no time, no flesh, to waste.

This one: an empty flower pot stained with moss. This one: a formal garden with no weeds, nothing out of place.

Here is one large and welcoming, wide, soft, slow: a sofa soul that holds between the plushy cushions secrets, like lint and scattered change.

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Imagine walking through a crowded room and being able to pick up each person's inner life like an object. Mary F. C. Pratt's "Shape of Souls" plays with that idea. Its five short stanzas give five souls, and none is described through an abstract word like kindness or ambition. Each is a thing you could find in a drawer, a toy box, a garden or a living room. The central idea is that character is something we feel through weight, texture and movement, and that every kind of soul, guarded or generous, deserves curiosity rather than judgement.

The first stanza is the only one with a story in it. The soul is "crumpled like a scrap of paper / she thought she didn't want, / but changed her mind, and salvaged, / smoothed out as well as she could." The verbs carry the drama: crumpled, salvaged, smoothed. The poem doesn't say who "she" is, but one natural reading is a woman who once rejected part of herself and then took it back. The final phrase, "as well as she could," admits that creases remain. The soul is neither ruined nor perfect, only repaired.

The next two stanzas are a pair of opposites, and their sound does much of the work. The "small and bouncy" soul is "slippery, elusive," and the sliding s and l sounds keep it hard to hold. It ends on a long compound, "a transparent glitter-filled superball," which suggests something you can see straight through and still can't catch. The wing-bone soul is built from the opposite material: "thin, lean, hard, strong." Four blunt adjectives hit one after another, and then comes the clipped "no time, no flesh, to waste." The line is as stripped down as the soul it describes. A wing bone is something made for flight, so the economy reads as purpose rather than coldness.

The fourth stanza sets two portraits side by side with repeated colons: "This one: an empty flower pot / stained with moss. / This one: a formal garden / with no weeds, nothing out of place." Both are about gardens, and both are lacking something. The pot is empty, yet moss is alive, so the neglect isn't total. The formal garden is flawless, but its perfection is defined by what has been removed, the weeds, which are also a kind of wildness and life. The poem doesn't say which is sadder, and that restraint leaves the reader to decide.

Then the poem slows down for the sofa. "Wide, soft, slow" is a line you can't rush, because each word wants a stress, and "sofa soul" and "plushy cushions" add a soft hush of s and sh sounds. The ending is the cleverest image in the poem: the sofa holds "secrets, like lint and scattered change." Secrets are made small and ordinary, the sort of thing that slips down the back of a cushion and stays there without anyone being embarrassed. The comparison is funny, but it also describes a person who keeps what others lose and doesn't make a fuss about it.

The poem has no rhyme and no steady metre. Its line lengths follow the shape of each description, from the stub "a wing bone" to the longer, slumping lines about the sofa. The pointing words also change as it goes: "That one," "His," "This one," "Here is one." The speaker seems to move closer with each stanza, from glancing across a room to settling in the warmest spot at the end. That is my reading of the arrangement, since the poem never says a ranking is intended, and it avoids a moral or a verdict.

That refusal is part of its appeal. Pratt makes the abstract idea of a soul as physical as a pocketful of belongings, and she lets the reader recognise friends, relatives and even themselves in the objects. It also makes a good model for students. Choosing the right object, the right verb and the right sound can say more about a person than a list of adjectives.

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