EQUINOX — Summary

Blow out the candle and see the darkness decrease: red berries on the yew outside the window, growing as the sun rises, the yellow grape vine framing the frosted flowers, gray dogwood crimson, white and green.

Blow out the candle and the darkness decreases: what you don’t know, the smallness of your self, the wideness of the world, all the colors of this morning, the brilliant point of the morning star, the lamps in other windows. Outside your tiny circle the darkness decreases. Step outside: so many now, standing on our doorsteps, waiting for sunrise, waiting.

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Pratt's "Equinox" begins with a small, simple act: blowing out a candle at daybreak. Instead of making the room darker, it lets the morning in. As the flame goes, the speaker notices what was there all along outside the window: red yew berries, a yellow grape vine, frosted flowers, a gray dogwood turning crimson. The title suggests a moment of balance between night and day, and the poem catches that in-between light.

In the second stanza the idea widens. The candle's glow becomes a "tiny circle," a picture of how little any one person sees or knows. Beyond it are the morning star and the lamps in other windows, which show that others are awake too. The final lines invite us to step outside, where "so many" people stand on their doorsteps, waiting. The mood is quiet, hopeful and humble. The speaker feels wonder at how large the world is, and a gentle comfort in waiting for the light together.

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