QUESTIONS CONCERNING BALLGOWNS SEEN IN A NEW YORK DEPARTMENT STORE — Summary

Why would a grown woman dress like the Black Knight in armor and a feathered helm, squeaking, clomping through a ballroom as if it were a battlefield? Or why a black-scaled mermaid– fishbody and no feet? How can a mermaid dance? Slithering, flopping across the deck, ungracefully hauling along.

Encumbrance, is that what we want? We have enough, it would seem, what with dishes and calendars, lovers and babies and all.

Burkas and veils, feet broken and bound, all this stuff of oppression we deplore, and yet we let them dress us–to dance!– in mummy wrappings as if we were dead, or metallic foil like salmon ready for the grill– Is that what we are?

Our lives are so tight, squeezed between certainty and what we think we shall be. Too many dirty sidewalks, hall carpets, too many dirty kitchen floors to tread our ordinary days.

Let us dance, at least, in long scarves, Isadora-style, soft hangings of silk and foam, or in our skins alone. Let us be loosed, if only in fantasy– no bones or stays– our bare feet free to tripple along the world’s moonlit, flowerstrewn unpaved floors.

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Standing in a department store, the speaker looks at ballgowns and can't make sense of them. One looks like armor, another like a mermaid's tail, and both seem to make dancing clumsy or impossible. From there the questions widen. Women already carry plenty, she says: dishes, calendars, lovers, babies. Why add more? She points out the irony that we condemn burkas and bound feet as oppression, yet we let fashion wrap us up like mummies or foil-covered salmon.

The tone starts out wry and teasing, then turns more serious as the speaker describes ordinary lives squeezed tight and worn down by endless dirty floors. The ending shifts into longing. She imagines dancing in loose silk scarves, or in bare skin, with no bones or stays, free on a moonlit, flower-strewn ground. The final mood is hopeful, even tender, though she admits this freedom may live only in fantasy.

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