INTERVIEWING MRS. WILKINSON: The Place — Poem analysis

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

My sister and me managed pretty well, and there weren’t any family around, so they let us stay on in the house. I’ve been here ever since. Married Arthur when I was seventeen, and he farmed a bit with me when he wasn’t logging, but he didn’t last too long. Stepped on a nail and got blood poisoning. Never had time to have a baby, and never wanted another man, after Arthur.

My sister left here right after Gram died, went out west and never came back. I hear she’s dead now, too.

I’ve kept things up pretty well, I’d say, like Gram did. Still have hens, the flowers, and pumpkins and beans and that. I spend all summer out in the yard. I don’t like winter so much. The house feels cramped then, what with the imps and all, but I keep busy, keep things tidy. Gram would have wanted it that way.

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Mrs. Wilkinson never raises her voice, and that is exactly what makes her story so unsettling. Speaking as if to a visitor with a notebook, she gives a lifetime in about twenty lines: a house she was allowed to keep, a husband who died, a sister who left, a grandmother whose standards still govern the place. The central idea is that a person can survive enormous loss by turning it into routine, and that what she refuses to say matters more than what she does.

Pratt builds the poem as a one-sided interview. We never hear the questions, only the answers, and the answers are plain, practical and a little evasive. The title suggests this is one poem among several about the same woman, though the text itself gives us everything we need. The voice is carefully built from spoken language: "My sister and me managed pretty well," "pumpkins and beans and that." The slightly ungrammatical "me" and the trailing "and that" make her sound like a real neighbour, someone who has told this story before and sanded it smooth.

The best evidence of that smoothing is how she handles death. Arthur's end takes two short sentences: "he didn't last too long. / Stepped on a nail and got blood poisoning." There is no grief in the phrasing, only cause and effect, as though she were reporting a fence that fell down. The tiny, brutal detail of the nail makes the death feel both absurdly small and impossible to argue with. Her sister's death is reduced further, to hearsay: "I hear she's dead now, too." That "too" quietly adds her to a list that already includes Arthur and Gram, and the reader feels the list growing even though she never counts it.

Other phrases hold more than they admit. "Never had time to have a baby" is a strange way to put it. It could mean the marriage was cut short, or it could be a reason she has settled on so the matter can be closed. The next line, "never wanted another man, after Arthur," is the closest she comes to a statement of feeling, and even that is delivered as a fact about her habits. Notice, too, the unnamed "they" who "let us stay on in the house." Someone with authority once decided her fate, and she still speaks with the gratitude of a person who was permitted rather than entitled.

The poem has no rhyme and no regular metre. Its rhythm is the rhythm of talk: short declarative sentences, mostly end-stopped lines, and a flat, even pace. Occasionally a line runs on ("and he farmed a bit with me when he wasn't logging, / but he didn't last too long") and the reader sees the way her sentences slide past pain before it can settle. The three stanzas also tell us something. The first, the longest, covers the past and her marriage. The second, only three lines, disposes of her sister. The third returns to the present and to the house. The sister's stanza is the shortest because it is the one she tries hardest not to dwell on.

Gram frames the whole poem. She appears at the start as the person whose death changed everything and at the end as the invisible supervisor: "Gram would have wanted it that way." Mrs. Wilkinson keeps the hens, the flowers, the beans, and her summers "out in the yard," and she does it in a spirit of inheritance. The place is a duty as much as a home, and the title, "The Place," makes it sound almost like a character with demands of its own.

Then comes the poem's strangest moment. In winter, "the house feels cramped then, / what with the imps and all." The casual "and all" makes the imps sound like an ordinary nuisance, like drafts or mice. Whether they are a folk belief, a figure for loneliness, or a sign of a mind alone too long, the poem deliberately does not say. Judging by the imagery, the cramped house is crowded with the people who are gone. Her answer is the last line of defence: "I keep busy, keep things tidy."

That is what makes the poem significant. Pratt lets a modest, unremarkable voice carry a life of isolation without a single complaint, and trusts the reader to hear the silence around the words. Mrs. Wilkinson's tidiness is a kind of courage, and also a kind of fence.

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