TIMES — Poem analysis

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

Anytime you need an extra hour remember you can do it; no one will care.

Tell your boss, the teachers at your school, dentist–whomever–TIME CHANGE! It depends, as Einstein said, and hours are anyway makebelieve.

Even sunrise and sunset are most precarious, depending as they do on balance, the fine rim of universal turn.

For the days to be long, for time to pass slow, there must be markers of excitement, but

why would I want a comet to fall, anything but this graceful swing around the sun, this easy similarity of days?

How the Magical Thinking works: You notice that all is ordinary, and you’re thankful.

You’re asking for trouble; now things will fall apart. This is no mere superstition.

It doesn’t matter what you think. Troubles come whether you will or not. It’s how evolution happens: adaptation to stress, the tiny advantage in your genes.

I have stopped handing mine along; trouble is no longer my necesssity. But the times don’t listen; still the auspicious hours arrive, still they pass.

Listen, time passes. Listen? Touch it–the texture like tight wound wool, rows of pattern knit in color, yarn around the fingers, needle click.

Smell it pass– the coffee brewed again, yeast to bread to toast.

Can you taste it– time–flavored like wrinkled apples, new maple syrup, the cherry lollipops you coveted way back, when you were a kid.

Hindus have a Day of Paint. Children learn early to paint themselves first, with water color, before someone else does it in color that will remain till the skin wears away.

Though we might not suspect it, we are never groundless, here. We have all the dust of time solid beneath our feet.

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Time, in Mary F. C. Pratt's "Times," begins as a joke and ends as solid ground. The first section is cheerfully subversive. If you need an extra hour, just announce "TIME CHANGE!" to your boss, your teachers, your dentist. The shouted capitals and the fused word "makebelieve" give the lines a mock-bossy playfulness, and the line "It depends, as Einstein said" borrows the authority of physics to claim that hours are invented. The section closes less comfortably, though. Sunrise and sunset are "precarious," balanced on "the fine rim of universal turn." The joke has opened a small gap under our feet.

The next three sections explore what that gap feels like. The speaker's wish is modest: no comet, only "this easy similarity of days." Notice how the second section dangles the word "but" at the end of a line before the question arrives, as if the thought hesitated. Then comes "Magical Thinking," capitalised like a diagnosis. To feel thankful for an ordinary day is to tempt fate, and the flat statement "This is no mere superstition" suggests the speaker half-believes it. Section 4 answers with a shrug: "It doesn't matter what you think." Trouble arrives regardless, and the poem borrows the cold vocabulary of evolution, "adaptation to stress, / the tiny advantage in your genes," to say so. Against that, the line "I have stopped handing mine along" is startlingly personal. Judging by the text, the speaker is no longer part of that biological chain, and the wry "trouble is no longer my necessity" sounds both relieved and a little wistful. The section ends by reviving the title: "the times don't listen." The plural covers hours, seasons and perhaps the age we live in. Two lines then repeat "still" ("still the auspicious hours arrive, / still they pass") and the repetition gives the poem its steadiest, most clock-like beat.

That word "listen" leads straight into the poem's centre. Section 5 begins by correcting itself: "Listen? Touch it." Time stops being an idea and becomes something handled. It has "texture / like tight wound wool," with "yarn around the fingers, / needle click," so the invented hours of section 1 are now knitted, patterned and made by hand. Then come smell and taste. "Coffee brewed again" holds its repetition inside the word *again*, and "yeast to bread to toast" is time as a chain of transformations. The tastes are "wrinkled apples" (age), "new maple syrup" (freshness) and cherry lollipops "you coveted / way back" (childhood). The shift to "you" pulls the reader in, and the questions soften the lecturing tone of earlier sections.

Formally, the poem is free verse with no rhyme and no regular metre. Its rhythm follows speech, and its short lines and numbered sections read like separate attempts at one problem. The register keeps changing, from comic to scientific to sensory, which fits a subject that refuses to stay one thing.

The last two sections work like a quiet coda. In section 6 children paint themselves with watercolour "before someone else does it / in color that will remain till the skin wears away." The poem names the festival only as a Hindu "Day of Paint." One reading is that it offers a rehearsal for experience, a chosen, washable mark before life leaves permanent ones. That connects to the earlier talk of stress and adaptation, but the poem leaves the link unspoken. Finally, section 7 answers the "precarious" rim of section 1: "we are never groundless, here." The ground is "the dust of time," the past accumulated and "solid beneath our feet." Dust suggests mortality, yet the poem makes it a foundation.

The poem matters because it takes an abstraction philosophers and physicists argue about and gives it a body. It admits fear of loss without melodrama, and it offers consolation without pretending trouble won't come. Its argument runs through the senses and ends on the ground we are standing on.

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