Snowflakes — Summary

Mary62708Contemplative

It's a short life For us, for everyone really Like a snowflake we form, we grow ,we fall and we melt away But that short moment of falling is a lifetime Seeing everyone else fall with you Unaware of when we will Touch the ground and melt away It's beautiful, almost peaceful

Almost. Yet there is the thought the undeniable truth The truth that it may look Beautiful but it hurts When a snowflake falls before you do It hurts but you haven't hit yet So grow and fall before you touch that ground Before you melt away

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Mary62708 compares a human life to a snowflake: it forms, grows, falls, and melts. The speaker says the fall is short, yet it feels like a whole lifetime, especially because everyone else is falling alongside us. Nobody knows when they will land, and at first the speaker finds that almost peaceful.

Then the poem turns on the word "Almost." The speaker admits that the beauty hides pain, particularly when another snowflake falls before you do. That image suggests the loss of someone close while you are still in the air, still waiting for your own ending. The mood shifts from calm acceptance to a quiet ache. The last lines read like advice, even a plea: grow and fall before you hit the ground. The poem seems to urge the reader to live fully while there is still time, even though the moment of melting cannot be avoided.

Read also

More by Mary62708

All poems
AnxiousMary62708

When depression met anxiety

When depression met anxiety it didn't go well They argued a lot and I had to calm them down They became competitive and wanted my attention at all times Depression taunts anxiety, tells it secrets
RomanticMary62708

My love

Every time my heart beat it beat in time with yours Every time I took a deep breath your lungs filled with air We were completely in sync Mind and body
SadMary62708

Today

I try to get through today I don't care for tomorrow It can run away from me Along with the light