You will assume I am asleep — Summary

You will message There will be no reply You will assume I am asleep Not that I have accepted to die

You will call There will be no answer You will assume I am asleep Not that you were an antagoniser

You will leave it till morning There will be no response You will assume I am still asleep But that's what you want

You begin to become concerned I haven't spoken at all You will assume the worst Your heart will soon fall

You hear of what happened You wish you could have aided You assumed I would wake up That I could have been persuaded

Now I sleep forever Just how you thought If only you had been kinder I wouldn't have been overwrought

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Told in the future tense, this poem imagines the speaker's own death and the way a friend or loved one will react to it. The speaker predicts a pattern: messages unanswered, calls unreturned, a night passing in silence. Each time, the other person will "assume I am asleep," a comforting excuse that hides the truth. By the final stanzas, the prediction becomes a statement of fact: "Now I sleep forever."

The speaker sounds bitter and hurt. The lines about kindness and being "overwrought" suggest they feel pushed to despair by how they were treated, and they blame the listener for it. The steady rhythm and repeated phrases make the poem feel calm on the surface, which makes the accusation colder. The mood is heavy, sorrowful and accusing, ending in regret. If the poem touches you or reminds you of your own life, it's worth talking to someone you trust, because reaching out matters.

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