Hopeful — Summary

mattchaceAnxious

Smooth as marble Glinting against the sun Contrary from the gauntness Eating away the bones Which rattles in weakness

A little too close To the blackened edge A foot in A foot out A dance with death With beeping machines For tune and melody Blinking lights For mood and ambience This crunchy paper To dress and impress The lonesome ferryman Paddling us to the end

Will this gold coin Suffice to pay The pain and torture That sweeps away A little of the wrong A little of the soul Enough to save some For a rainy day

Tomorrow maybe The party will end This useless lump Will finally rest But until the music Still beeps away And enough gold coin To buy our way

Maybe Just maybe We will dance away Death will wait For patience is his To ones such as us Walking the tightrope Between heaven and hell

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Read it as a poem about serious illness, most likely a hospital stay, though the poem never says so outright. The beeping machines, blinking lights and "crunchy paper" (perhaps a hospital gown) suggest a patient whose body is wasting away, "gauntness / eating away the bones." The speaker turns this into a strange party: the monitors are the music, the lights are the mood, and death is a dance partner waiting at the "blackened edge."

The ferryman and the gold coin come from the old image of paying to be carried across to the land of the dead. Here the coin seems to stand for money, or perhaps time, needed to keep treatment going and stay on this side. The tone is wry and weary, with dark humor in calling the body a "useless lump." Yet the title, and the final stanza's "maybe, just maybe," leave room for hope. The speaker walks a tightrope between heaven and hell, wanting the music to keep beeping a little longer.

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