«The tree's shake…» — Summary

The tree's shake The wind blows The gutter aches And the house groans. I can hear it all The roof tiles are moving, In the breeze The leaves rustling, And my heart will freeze Just for a moment Only for a second I close my eyes, I feel vulnerable And scared. My families asleep It's ten forty four And just like in the horror movies I fear someone will knock on my door. But I close my eyes And roll over in bed And just keep saying to myself "It's all in my head" And it's too my surprise, That I realise That its just, The autumn breeze.

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A speaker lies awake at night, listening to the house make noises: the gutter, the roof tiles, the leaves outside. Everyone else in the family is asleep, and the clock says ten forty-four. Alone with these sounds, the speaker feels a sudden jolt of fear, imagining a scene from a horror movie where someone knocks at the door.

What makes the poem believable is how ordinary the fear is. The speaker doesn't see anything frightening, only hears it, and the mind fills in the rest. The short, plain lines and simple rhymes ("bed" and "head") give it the quick, jumpy rhythm of a racing heart. Telling themselves "it's all in my head" is a small act of self-comfort, like a child talking themselves out of the dark.

The ending releases the tension. The cause was only the autumn breeze, and the mood shifts from dread to relief, with a touch of embarrassment at having been so worried.

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