voice o stars — Summary

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they whisper to me. in my sleep and as i write this to you, they're murmuring.

lovely voices they have, these whispers. like a song of harp and fiddle. urgent although calm.

you may be wondering "what do they whisper of" as you read this. to answer you my love

is everything, but nothing, if its not you. they repeat your name, dusk to dawn.

na pak as i eat. na pak as i sleep. na pak as i bathe in the light of the moon,

speaking back to the stars. can you hear me? do they voice on your behalf? i cant see

you, and it pains me. the sun is blinding, burning, blistering, blocking.

when will you return dear?

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A speaker lies awake, or drifts into sleep, while the stars murmur to them all night long. The voices sound beautiful, like harp and fiddle, calm but insistent. When the speaker addresses a loved one and explains what the stars say, the answer is "everything, but nothing, if its not you." In other words, every whisper comes back to the beloved's name, repeated from dusk to dawn. The repeated "na pak" seems to be that name or a phrase tied to it, though the poem doesn't explain it.

The speaker answers the stars and wonders whether they speak on the beloved's behalf. The mood turns from dreamy to aching. The sun becomes harsh, "burning, blistering, blocking," and the heavy b sounds feel like a wall between the two people. The poem ends on a small, quiet question: "when will you return / dear?" Beneath the lovely imagery is simple loneliness and waiting.

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