Still You — Summary

NataliaAngry

No matter how influenced you were when you did it, It was still you That did. The same face that used to kiss mine The same hands that would pick me up The same voice that helped me Is still the same as the face that Got in mine The same hands that grabbed my hair The same voice that told me It was always You. I will not budge or move When you scream FORGIVE ME! I will stay strong and still in my moment. For me And for you.

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Natalia's poem speaks to someone who hurt her, most likely someone she once loved and trusted. The opening lines reject an excuse: even if the person was influenced by something else when they did it, the harm still came from them. The poem then sets two versions of this person side by side. The face that kissed, the hands that lifted her up, and the voice that helped her are the very same face, hands, and voice that later hurt her, grabbed her hair, and told her it was always them. The repetition of "the same" makes the pain feel sharper, because the tenderness and the cruelty can't be separated.

The speaker ends in a firm, quiet place. When the other person screams "FORGIVE ME!", she won't move. The capital letters show how loud and desperate that demand is, while her calm contrasts with it. The mood is sad and tense, but also steady. Her stillness reads as self-protection, something she does "for me / and for you."

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