sinking feeling — Summary

There was this sinking feeling Planted inside me Where it everyday grows And stab me with it's painful thorns Leaving me scattered As a piece of fragile paper

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Nausha Ameen's "sinking feeling" describes a sadness that doesn't come and go but takes root. The speaker pictures it as something planted inside, like a seed, and it keeps growing day after day. The poem never says what caused it, which makes the feeling seem vague and hard to shake, the kind of heaviness many people recognize without being able to explain.

The imagery shifts from gentle to harsh. A plant sounds natural, even hopeful, but this one grows thorns that stab from within. The pain is private and constant. By the end, the speaker feels "scattered / As a piece of fragile paper," which suggests being torn, light, and easily damaged, with no strength to hold themselves together. The mood is quiet, vulnerable, and heavy. The short lines add to this, giving the poem a hushed, worn-down tone, as if the speaker has little energy left to say more.

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