These are the Haikus — Summary

Time, drains, innocent

A child is born, but Time drains it of innocence And it is no more

Dots, sprinkle, sadness

Onto my cake I sprinkle dark chocolate bits spelling out sadness

Curl, Safe, Claw

I curl into a safe cocoon of leaves hiding me from the sharp claws

Clouds, Thoughts, Hungry

The hungry heaven swallows the clouds of my thoughts still hungry for more

Tension, Remember, Hunted

The tension hurt my muscles who remembered the Pain: Being hunted

Forgot, Circle, Closed

I lay forgotten An isolated circle closed off from the world

Helpless, Mirror, Heavy

Helpless I looked Into the mirror to see Heavy clouded fog

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Nettle's poem is a sequence of haikus, each one built from three prompt words that appear above it. Those words act like seeds: "Time, drains, innocent" becomes a tiny story about a child losing innocence, and "Dots, sprinkle, sadness" turns into dark chocolate bits spelling out sadness on a cake. The sweetness of the cake makes the sadness feel oddly intimate, even a little darkly funny.

As the poems go on, the speaker moves from observing life in general to describing their own feelings. They curl up in a cocoon of leaves to hide from "sharp claws," feel their muscles tense with the memory of being hunted, and lie forgotten in a circle closed off from the world. The last haiku ends with the speaker looking helplessly into a mirror and seeing only "heavy clouded fog."

The mood is lonely, anxious, and heavy, but it is also quiet and controlled. The short form makes each feeling land like a single sharp breath.

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