I miss you — Summary

NiaNia00Anxious

His large, ashy hands bigger than mines Stir the chicken noodle soup As he squeezes the phone in anger and swearing to the other person on the line. It smell so good in here The Red walls yell around me The dining table shine like his anger The stove, a heated volcano, ready to explode. He dosen't noticed me yet "Don't burn the soup." I said His eyes gaze towards me He chuckles and says "It's nothing you have to worry about Babygirl."

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The poem puts us in a kitchen where a man stirs soup while shouting angrily into a phone. The speaker watches him, and the small details around her feel tense. The red walls "yell," the table shines "like his anger," and the stove is "a heated volcano, ready to explode." The warm, appealing smell of the soup sits uneasily beside all this menace.

The speaker seems cautious and a little afraid. She stays unnoticed until she finally speaks, and even then she only says, "Don't burn the soup." It reads like a safe thing to say, though the poem may hint at something bigger than soup. His reply, a chuckle and "Babygirl," sounds affectionate but also dismissive, as if her worry doesn't count. The mood is edgy and uncertain, a home that feels comforting and threatening at once. The title, "I miss you," adds a note of longing that the poem itself never fully explains.

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