Untitled 072 — Poem analysis

don't regret that have met you but sometimes wish had walked away at the start and left things at hello

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Read the poem aloud and something is missing before you can say what. The full sentence would be "I don't regret that I have met you, but sometimes I wish I had walked away at the start and left things at hello." In the poem as written, the "I" has vanished three times. The speaker is the one doing the regretting, the meeting, the wishing, and the walking, and yet the speaker never appears. The poem is about ambivalence toward a relationship, but it is also about a person who has quietly written themselves out of their own sentence.

The central idea is a confession that sounds like a contradiction. The first half is reassuring: "don't / regret / that / have / met / you." The word "but" then turns the poem round, and "sometimes" softens the blow just enough to be believable. The speaker isn't claiming the whole thing was a mistake. They are admitting that, on certain days, they would trade everything that followed for the safety of a first greeting. Both feelings are true at once, which is why the poem doesn't resolve them.

The most striking choice is the form. Almost every line holds a single word, so the poem comes down the page one step at a time. That suits its content, because "walked" and "away" sit on separate lines and the reader's eye has to walk away too. The vocabulary is also almost entirely one syllable: "don't," "that," "met," "you," "wish," "start." Only four words run longer: "regret," "sometimes," "away" and "hello." These are the poem's emotional anchors. Everything else is plain, and these four stand out from it.

The sound is worth a closer look, though there is no rhyme. "Regret" and "met" share the same closing sound, so the feeling and the meeting are tied together even in negation. Then comes the stretch "at / the / start," three tiny words, each given its own line. The poem stalls here, as if the speaker is lingering at the moment they wish they could return to. The line "and / left things" is the only one that holds two words, and it comes just before the end. "Things" is a deliberately vague word. We never learn what happened between the two people, and the poem doesn't need to say. Whatever came after hello has been squashed into one shrug of a noun.

That brings us to the ending. The poem closes on "hello" rather than "goodbye," which is where you might expect a poem about regret to land. The wish isn't to have ended things better. It is to have never let them begin. "Hello" here is the smallest unit of a relationship, a word that commits you to nothing. The repeated "at" also mirrors the poem's logic. First comes "at the start," then "at hello," so the wish is stated twice, the second time more precisely, as though the speaker is narrowing in on the exact spot where they would turn back.

The missing "I" ties all this together. The grammar is clipped, closer to a text message or a note jotted in a margin than to a polished sentence. Dropping pronouns makes the voice sound tired and guarded. It also makes the speaker smaller, which fits a wish to have left things at a greeting. The signature has a similar look: the name above the poem is a run of separated consonants, and it reads like a word with its vowels stripped out. That may be coincidence, but it matches the poem's habit of leaving out what would normally hold a statement together. The title, "Untitled 072," suggests one piece among many, though the poem tells us nothing more about that.

The poem is significant because of how little it claims. It doesn't melodramatically curse the other person or insist on gratitude. It leaves a quiet, uncomfortable truth in an honest shape: you can value an experience and still wish you had avoided it. Because the "I" is missing, readers can step into the gap, and anyone who has felt that tug between "I'm glad" and "I wish" will recognise it. The poem puts that feeling on the page without explaining it.

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