January Walking Meditation in Seattle — Summary

When it rains like this I look in at soaked yards and wonder how mole hills retain integrity.

And doesn’t the mound of upturned dirt hide a well-like passageway to a tunneled home? So how do moles keep dry, or, at least, undrowned,

in these deluges? Moles are everywhere, invaders of our civic plats, mocking our property lines (as if they mean anything in the true world

of claw and tail). For instance, at the panoramic overlook where metropolis and bay glitter glamorously— despite the storm, mole hummocks

humbly punctuate the lawn. Each mole cake of rock and soil proves who the celebrants must be— the slim, blind chiselers below the grass.

They survive these downpours; evidence pops up peninsula-wide. We consider featuring the new topography

with a top-scatter of wildflower mix or clover seed, glad the moles aren’t gone, glad the moles don’t drown, awed by the soft, tiny engineers.

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On a rainy January day in Seattle, the speaker looks out at soaked yards and starts to wonder something small and oddly practical: how do moles stay dry, or at least avoid drowning, when the ground is so waterlogged? The question grows into a kind of admiration. Moles ignore our property lines, which mean nothing in their world of "claw and tail," and even at a glittering city overlook, their mounds dot the lawn.

The speaker begins to see these hills as a celebration, with the "slim, blind chiselers" below the grass as the real guests of honor. By the end, the tone is warm and a little playful. Instead of resenting the damage to the lawn, "we" think about scattering wildflower or clover seed over the new bumpy ground. The mood is calm and curious, like the walk in the title, and it ends in gladness and awe at the "soft, tiny engineers" who keep going through the storm.

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