She is not she if she holds still — Summary

She runs down long flights, two-by-two, down Westmount, sloughing, (like gloves dropped to the sidewalk unseen) the studious girl of the uniform, of the rules

—the runs are hers and quick, to home, to her eager partner in freedom, russet dog—

then

she leaves the father eternally immersed in research, the mother who lines windowsills with silent ferns, plies them with silent care, her children too —heads out

Her young brain stows maps—strolls along Saint Catherine’s or Sherbrooke, past Ogilvie’s and the museum, summits Mount Royal for grand aspects of a wide grey Saint Lawrence and thin dark shapes of silent ships on its cold flow

(She is not she if she holds still)

Years hence, when asked if she speaks French, a woman will recall instead what mattered to her then—the slow progress of those silhouettes sliding across the silver river, the companionable quiet of the calm dog, the acceptance of fresh snow, how smells of others’ suppers sent her home in darkness

In a warmer town, the woman walks with a different dog yet unfolds the same old city routes, follows ancient mental maps, marches alongside ghosts of girl and dog and knows their own true reasons

The retriever, excellent walker, protecting the girl from shadows, allowing her roaming and telling the world

This is for me, this randomness

And this is true and not— for dog to mark scent, for girl to mark dashed lines, crooked or direct, from home to treasure, love to death, sense to art

Their own true reasons

She loves me Hear the black birds Breathe in city smoke

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A girl slips out of her uniform, her strict household, and the quiet of her parents, and runs into the city with her russet dog. Montreal's streets, hills and river become her freedom. The poem names Westmount, Sainte-Catherine, Sherbrooke and Mount Royal, and she stores them as mental maps. The parenthetical line, "She is not she if she holds still," sums her up: she only feels like herself when she is moving.

Later, as a woman in a warmer town, she walks with a different dog and finds herself retracing those old routes beside the "ghosts of girl and dog." What she remembers is not French lessons but ships drifting on the river, the calm companionship of the dog, snow, and the smell of other people's suppers. The mood is tender, nostalgic and a little wistful. The ending, with its short, scattered lines about love, black birds and city smoke, feels like a breath of pure sensation, as if wandering itself were the point.

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