may my mind one day — Summary

may my mind one day be open to silent dogs who hold the secrets of stillness

the trail miles they run are better than talk if I trot behind them I’ll let my words walk

and let my words slink away tired and sleepy and sated and pliant

and may I lie sunning grassily and love my lapse into hours letters-free

and toss aside sentences and syntax so I may find whatever peace I suspect

dogs never know a vacancy in their lives dashing through the woods wild as wordless wind

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The speaker wishes for a break from language. Watching dogs run along trails, she imagines they know a stillness that people with their constant talk can't reach. She hopes to follow them, letting her words "walk" and then "slink away tired / and sleepy and sated," as if words were animals worn out after a long day outdoors.

What she asks for is simple: to lie in the grass in the sun, to spend hours without letters, to throw away sentences and syntax. The last lines suggest she is guessing, not knowing. She "suspects" dogs feel no emptiness, only the rush of running through the woods "wild as wordless wind."

The mood is drowsy, wistful, and a little playful. Repeated sounds, like the soft s's in "sleepy and sated" and the w's in the final line, make the poem feel relaxed and breezy. It reads like a wish whispered by someone tired of thinking in words.

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