Goddess at the Shore — Summary

Lights up. FAMILY picnics, center stage. Cries of gulls, waves smashing ashore. Enter, stage left, at speed, a splendid foxy blur: the GODDESS: All hail! Hail my new perfume! DAUGHTER: Yuck! What did she roll in? Good grief! YOUNGEST: Get away, dog! You reek! You reek! GODDESS: Bow before me in my radiance. MOTHER: Ugh! She found a dead fish or seal. DAUGHTER: No way I’ll ride home with that stink! GODDESS: I bring you this powerful and unique scent as a portent of my strength– FATHER: Get her to go in the ocean. YOUNGEST throws sticks offstage. GODDESS pursues. MOTHER: She won’t dry with the salt water plus it will make her scratch. Stop throwing things. GODDESS returns. FAMILY stands, meek. Beat. DAUGHTER: I refuse to ride for two hours with that rank dog. YOUNGEST: We can’t leave her! DAUGHTER: Everything will smell like rotten– MOTHER: Yes. I’m sorry. FAMILY packs picnic, exits stage right. GODDESS remains. GODDESS: Subdued before my majesty, my followers, at last, bow before me. YOUNGEST: (From offstage) Come on, Butterscotch! GODDESS exits stage right, barking. CURTAIN

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Written like a short play script, this poem shows a family picnic at the beach interrupted by a dog who has rolled in something dead. The twist is that the "Goddess" is the dog, though the poem only makes this clear at the end, when the youngest child calls out "Come on, Butterscotch!" and the Goddess exits, barking. Until then, her lines are pure grandeur: she announces a "new perfume" and demands that everyone bow to her radiance. The family, meanwhile, hears only a stink and reacts with disgust.

The humor comes from the gap between what the dog thinks is happening and what is really happening. She believes the family's retreat means they are "subdued before my majesty." In truth, they are just packing up to escape the smell. The stage directions and quick, bickering dialogue keep the tone light and comic. There is also a gentle note of affection, since the youngest clearly doesn't want to leave her behind, and the family does, in the end, take her home.

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