River Fall — Summary

Ray.Contemplative

Hammer's falling, Silently. Every metre down, Deeper.

You hear the waterfall, Soothing. The wind snoring through the leafage, Crystalling.

Water touches stones, Leaves path to unknown...

SPLASH! Hammer falls, Nature gets disturbed For a little moment.

And it's back to being, Living. Where there's no end with no beggining, Lurking.

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Ray's "River Fall" watches a hammer drop silently through the air toward a waterfall, and the poem is really about what happens to a quiet place when something foreign breaks into it. The first stanzas build calm: the waterfall is "soothing," the wind snores through the leaves, and the water gently "leaves path to unknown." The speaker seems to be a still, attentive observer, almost lulled by the scene. Then comes the loud "SPLASH!" and the hammer lands, disturbing nature "for a little moment."

What stands out is how quickly the disturbance passes. Nature returns to "being, / Living," and the closing lines describe something with "no end with no beggining." The speaker seems to feel a mix of reassurance and unease. The natural world absorbs the intrusion easily, which is comforting, but the last word, "Lurking," adds a hint of mystery. The spaced-out lines also mimic falling and drifting, so the mood is meditative, hushed, and slightly eerie.

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