None of these — Summary

I wanted to be your rising sun and your setting moon I wanted to be the warmth you felt in the afternoon I wanted to be your cool breeze, but i'm none of these none of these I wanted to be the smile you wake to everyday I wanted to be your hug when you walk away I wanted to be the wind in the trees yet i'm none of these none of these I wanted to be your husband and you to be my wife I wanted to lay with you each and everynight now that will never be, because I am none of these none of these

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Rich Mansfield's "None of these" is a love poem built around regret. The speaker lists everything he wanted to be for someone: the sun and moon of her day, the warmth of the afternoon, a cool breeze, the smile she wakes to, the hug when she walks away. Each wish is tender and a little grand, as if he wanted to be part of the very world she lives in. But the refrain keeps cutting in: "none of these."

The final stanza makes the wish more personal and more painful. He wanted to be her husband and share every night with her, and he says plainly that "now that will never be." The poem suggests a relationship that has ended, or never happened at all, though it doesn't say which.

The mood is sad and quiet. The repeated line works like a heavy sigh, and the simple rhymes and plain words make the grief feel sincere and unguarded. It reads like someone admitting a loss out loud, with no attempt to dress it up.

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