Just A Dream — Summary

I want to feel your skin I want to hold you tight I want to taste your kiss I want your head on my chest so I can smell your hair while you sleep at night I want the comforts of your breathing I want to feel your heart beating when you smile in your sleep i want it to be of me your dreaming I want that smile in the morning when i go to steal a kiss and you say , no please, I haven't brushed my teeth yet yet I lean in slowly because I don't care you kiss me any way with your bed shaped hair I want to watch you in your undies dance across the floor because every morning I wake to you makes me want you even more

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Rich Mansfield's "Just A Dream" is a list of wishes, nearly every line starting with "I want." The speaker misses a partner and imagines the small, close moments of waking up beside her: her skin, her breathing, her heartbeat against his chest, the smell of her hair. The title suggests that none of this is happening right now, so the tenderness is tinged with absence.

What stands out is how ordinary the details are. He doesn't dream of grand gestures. He wants her smiling in her sleep, hopes she's dreaming of him, and pictures her saying she hasn't brushed her teeth yet while he leans in anyway. Her messy "bed shaped hair" and her dancing across the floor in her underwear are affectionate, playful touches. The mood is warm, romantic and a little wistful. The repeated "I want" gives it the feel of a quiet, heartfelt confession, and the last lines show that being near her only makes his longing stronger.

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