Elephant Song — Summary

On evenings filled with rain the elephants believe my open door leads to a green stretch of forest and trundle through.

Each concocts a song or howl of her own— a moan of bassoon, a pitch of piccolos and even agonies of strings to tell of elephant

tragedies coated in silt. The mind is a traitor giving away our tales when we are half awake,

the elephants to fall in love with then and follow into the music, loud in the meadow, softer in the shade of trees.

Only their ears detect the mourning notes delivered by miles of unsuspecting stone. Through her skinny bird feet, Honeyguide,

bereft, never gleans more than sugar, and monkeys still pick and chatter and elephants move

to safety, colors same as vapor, same as wood, same as sky. They stand plain, enormous, hidden. Drift closer to hear nightsong, closer

to dream the prancing dog—wise as Buddha, closer to meet elephants in a dripping melodic forest.

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On a rainy evening, the speaker's open door becomes, in the elephants' eyes, an entrance to green forest, and they wander through. What follows feels like a half-waking dream. Each elephant makes her own music, and the poem describes it through instruments: bassoon, piccolos, strings. Their songs seem to carry grief, "tragedies coated in silt." The speaker suggests the mind gives away its stories when we're drowsy, and that is how we end up falling in love with these animals and following them into the sound.

The scene widens into a landscape of birds, monkeys and stone, where the elephants blend into vapor, wood and sky. They are huge yet hidden. The speaker seems to be inviting us, and maybe themselves, to "drift closer" and listen. The mood is gentle, hushed and dreamy, tinged with sadness but mostly wonder. The poem ends in a "dripping melodic forest," where the boundary between room, dream and wilderness has dissolved.

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