Chrysanthemum Kiss — Summary

It was no secret that she was a flight risk

and would be true to none of us,

but under her balcony, we thirsted for a token.

She leaned back her head pressed fingers to lips, let go,

and sent a single kiss flying up into the night.

Each of us, expecting to be the lucky target, swung

our arms back like wings, raised our heads, and pointed

our lips skyward. At its apex, invisible, her kiss burst,

shattering our expectations but in the next moment

renewing our hopes as it gave rise to kisses

by the thousands. In seconds they vanished, not a peck

left, and she, seeking amusement elsewhere, disappeared

into the night, leaving us gaping and parched in her wake.

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A group of admirers stands beneath a woman's balcony, hoping for some sign of affection from her. They already know she won't be faithful to any of them, yet they wait anyway. She blows a single kiss into the night, and each man is sure it's meant for him. They fling their arms back like wings and point their lips at the sky.

Then the kiss bursts out of sight, which feels like a letdown, until it breaks into thousands of smaller kisses. The title's chrysanthemum image fits: the kiss blooms like a firework. But the kisses vanish before anyone catches one, and she leaves, bored, to find fun somewhere else.

The speaker speaks as one of the crowd ("us," "we"), and the mood mixes longing, comic eagerness, and a sting of humiliation. The men look a little foolish, gaping upward, but the poem is gentle about their hunger. It ends on thirst, a want that never gets satisfied.

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