Farmers Market — Poem analysis

Ruth JewellCheerful

As I round the corner a palette of wonders spread out before me the smell of fresh bread drifts toward me A line up of vegetables and fruits delight the eye plump peaches, nectarines, and apples line up in a juicy chorus line Lettuce graces the tables in their varied frills of green bright orange carrots with dark green tops call to me … take me home huge green watermelons compete with golden cantaloupe to see who wins the trip to my table Golden Jars glisten with the hard work of Bees, Olive oil, fresh fish, homemade cheese, jam, pastry, all vying for my attention, all longing to be taken home

Suddenly I am aware of a joyful cacophony of sound and color fiddlers playing country music farmers calling out, … flowers, fresh apples “here, taste my candy, once you tried it you can’t turn it down” conversations overlap … “come you must try … oh that is the cutest scarf how much is …. this melts in … you have the best potatoes, do you have any red … OH George LOOK …” dogs bark, children shout, two young women playing Mozart food for my table, sounds to lift the heart, smells to savor and remember OH the lovely sounds, sights and smells of Edmonds Farmers Market

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Ruth Jewell's "Farmers Market" begins with a small movement: the speaker rounds a corner, and a whole world opens up. What follows is a celebration of one ordinary place, told as an overload of the senses. The central idea is that a market is more than a spot to buy groceries. It is a feast for eyes, ears and nose at once, and the speaker's delight in it is close to gratitude. The last line names the place outright, "Edmonds Farmers Market", as if the poem has been building toward a proper name worth cheering for.

The poem is in free verse. There is no rhyme scheme and no regular beat, and the lines are ragged and unevenly indented, as if the page were crowded with stalls. That suits the subject. Punctuation is sparse, so the lines tumble forward the way a stroll through a busy market does, with the eye pulled from one thing to the next. The speaker even notices the smell of bread before anything else, a nice touch, since scent often reaches us before sight does.

The first stanza is built from playful personification. The opening phrase, "a palette of wonders", casts the market as a painter's work, and the produce soon takes on human roles. Peaches and nectarines "line up in a juicy chorus line", a pun that turns fruit into a stage act. The lettuce wears "varied frills of green", like a row of dresses. The carrots speak: "call to me … take me home". Watermelons and cantaloupe "compete … to see who wins the trip to my table", so shopping becomes a game show in which the speaker is the prize judge. The effect is a clever reversal. Instead of the shopper wanting the food, the food is "vying for my attention" and "longing to be taken home". The phrase "Golden Jars glisten with the hard work of Bees" is the most thoughtful moment in the stanza. The capital letters give the bees a quiet dignity, and for a moment the poem reminds us that every item on these tables is someone's labour.

The single word "Suddenly" marks a sharp turn. The poem has so far been about sight and smell, and now sound floods in, and the layout changes to match. Overlapping voices are crammed into one line with ellipses and interruptions: "oh that is the cutest scarf how much is …. this melts in … you have the best potatoes, do you have any red … OH George LOOK …". Nobody finishes a sentence, and that is exactly how real crowd noise sounds. The capitals of "OH George LOOK" make the page itself seem loud. Even the vendor's patter, "once you tried it you can't turn it down", is a tiny piece of overheard theatre. The speaker calls all this a "joyful cacophony of sound and color", and the phrase blends hearing and seeing so that the senses merge, as they do in a lively crowd.

The range of sounds matters too. Fiddlers play country music, and two young women play Mozart. Dogs bark, children shout. Nothing is edited out or ranked, and the mix of high and low, formal and rowdy, suggests a place where everyone is welcome.

The ending gathers the whole experience into three short, parallel lines: "food for my table, / sounds to lift the heart, / smells to savor and remember". The rhythm tightens here, and the list moves from the practical (food) to the emotional (a lifted heart) to memory. The word "table" returns from the first stanza, so we end where the shopping began, but the table now stands for more than a meal. The alliteration of "sounds, sights and smells" gives the final line a happy, singsong ring.

The poem's significance lies in its plain, generous attention. It finds wonder in a Saturday-morning kind of scene that many people pass through without noticing. Its energy comes from its lack of polish: the breathless lists, the interrupted chatter and the exclamatory last line all suggest a speaker too happy to tidy up. It also shows how a poem can work like a snapshot, holding a moment so that a reader who has never been there can hear the fiddles and smell the bread.

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