six of crows | day 13 | freewrite — Summary

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a ripple of black perches on the church steeple a lonesome crow, inky feathers fall to the streets below

he's joined by another, who holds a metal ring in her beak and adds it to her stolen shrine a pile of trinkets that shine

a third joins the group, followed by a fourth and fifth under the bell they gather round midnight toll has yet to sound

the sixth crow arrives at last, cawing bloody triumph for together they are six crows and where they are, death follows.

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The poem follows a flock of crows arriving one by one on a church steeple, until six are gathered beneath the bell. The first is alone, shedding feathers onto the streets below. The second brings a metal ring and adds it to a "stolen shrine" of shiny trinkets, which makes the birds seem like collectors guarding treasure. As the third, fourth and fifth arrive, the scene builds toward a deadline: the midnight toll hasn't sounded yet.

The speaker watches from a distance and doesn't say how they feel outright. Instead, the feeling comes through the mood, which is eerie, tense and a little gothic. The black feathers, the church, the hush before midnight and the word "bloody" all hint at something dangerous. The last two lines make that explicit, turning the crows into an omen of death. The rhyming couplets and steady counting give it the feel of a dark nursery rhyme or a spell, with each new arrival tightening the suspense.

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