hearts and spades | day 19 | freewrite — Summary

SquireAnxious

the soil, freshly turned lays decorated with flowers she smiles, admiring her work, on which she'd toiled for hours

lace adorned gloves, stained with dirt lay on a table with matches unlit she smiles, striking and dropping one the fire burns as bright as her wit

the bed for two, still unmade lays only one, face flecked with gore she smiles, peaceful at last, so-called lover gone forevermore

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Read quickly, "Squire" looks like a woman tending her garden. Read again, and the details turn darker. The freshly turned soil, the dirt-stained gloves, the unmade bed and the "face flecked with gore" suggest she has killed her lover and buried him, then covered the grave with flowers. The poem never states this outright, which makes it more unsettling.

The speaker, who watches her from outside, describes her calm. She smiles in every stanza, and the repetition makes that smile feel eerie rather than warm. She is "peaceful at last," as if the act has freed her. The "so-called lover" hints at betrayal or a relationship that had gone bad, though the poem gives no further reason.

The mood is cold, controlled and darkly satisfied. Gentle images like lace, flowers and a match flame sit beside violence, and that contrast gives the poem its chill. The fire "as bright as her wit" suggests she sees herself as clever, and perhaps proud of it.

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