cycles | day 22 | freewrite — Summary

SquireRomantic

you're the ocean, with high and lows emotions that turn the tides that wash over me that wash everything else away

you're the moon, waxing and waning centerpiece of a starry sky you lift me up, and lift my spirits

you're the world turning on and on seasons changing with each breath canvas your skies and soil a canvas of oranges and greens

we're a cycle, eternal for as long as it matters, coming back to each other on common ground, for common love

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Squire's poem is a love poem built from comparisons to nature. The speaker tells their beloved, one after another, "you're the ocean," "you're the moon," "you're the world." Each image says something different. The ocean stands for moods that rise and fall and wash everything else away. The moon, waxing and waning, lifts the speaker up and lifts their spirits. The world turning through its seasons, with skies and soil painted in oranges and greens, suggests change that never really ends.

The final stanza shifts from "you" to "we." The couple becomes its own cycle, "eternal for as long as it matters," always returning to "common ground" and "common love." The tone is warm and calm, with a quiet acceptance that love has highs and lows. The subtitle, "cycles | day 22 | freewrite," suggests this was written as part of a series, which fits the loose, flowing feel. The speaker seems grateful rather than anxious, trusting that the two will keep finding their way back to each other.

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