Why Not Me? — Summary

She delicately slips me on, Over her graceful feet, And dances with me. She tenderly works with me, Hour by hour, Day by day. All I hear is magical music, And her lively feet inside me, We practice everyday, She doesn't know, She shouldn't go to school, She should live with me, Dance with me. Hour by hour, Day by day. Without her I will suffer In a horrible, huge white bag, Filled with her clothes. I need her touch, I need to breathe in her proximity. Hour by hour, Day by day. And being seen with her in front Of millions of people I love the feeling, Being close to her Hour by hour, Day by day. I hate that guy, He gets to lift her, Hold her, Touch her more than I do. Hour by hour, Day by day. I hate it when she falls, She whimpers And he helps her up, I wish I could But I can't Hour by hour, Day by day. I can't help but feel skeptical, Does she have feelings for him? Does he love her? He doesn't love her like I do, I'm the one she should be with, Hour by hour, Day by day.

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The twist in this poem comes quietly: the speaker isn't a person at all, but a pair of dancing shoes. Judging by the imagery, "slips me on," "her lively feet inside me" and the "huge white bag" filled with her clothes, the shoes belong to a dancer who wears them for hours of daily practice and for performances in front of crowds.

The shoes speak like a devoted, possessive lover. They treasure her touch and dread being left in the bag when she goes to school. They resent her male partner, who lifts and holds her and helps her up when she falls, something the shoes can only watch. The refrain "Hour by hour, day by day" captures both the closeness of practice and the ache of waiting.

The mood is tender but tense. It starts out warm and magical, then slides into jealousy, insecurity and longing, ending with the speaker insisting, "I'm the one she should be with."

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