2/28/2020- Smoke — Summary

Sam GlaspyRomantic

I lit an incense today. In that, I once again met Smoke.

Smoke is a beautiful girl. I have loved her my whole life. Whether we come together from a cigarette or a fire, She always leaves her smell on me as a memory of her visit.

Today, I tried to confess. I offered my hand to her. I wished to dance To Tchaikovsky's Violin Concerto in D Major, My favorite of his works.

When we made contact, She dissolved. She apologized, but it's okay. Instead, she swarmed my senses, Making my numbed brain buzz.

Her shape curled in dazzling ringlets, And we began to dance around each other. Smoke surrounded me, Swirling and spiraling, spreading to each corner of my soul.

But soon, the incense will go out And Smoke and I will part once more. But I love her And her smell lingers As a reminder that she loves me.

Songs- Violin Concerto in D Minor op. 35- Tchaikovsky

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Sam Glaspy turns smoke from incense into a person: a beautiful girl the speaker has loved all his life. Whether she comes from a cigarette or a fire, she always leaves her scent behind, like a keepsake from a visit. Today the speaker tries to confess his feelings and offers his hand, hoping to dance to a Tchaikovsky violin concerto he loves. But smoke can't be held, so she dissolves at his touch. She apologizes, and he shrugs it off. She fills his senses instead, and the two end up circling each other in curling ringlets.

The mood is tender and a little wistful. The speaker is gentle about the rejection, and the dance feels intimate even without contact. Still, the ending carries sadness: the incense will burn out and she will go. He comforts himself with the lingering smell, which he reads as proof that she loves him back.

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