Leave — Summary

You promised not to leave The stakes are very high We both know what will happen If you leave I'll be crushed You won't know You'll be okay You won't have to deal with me And my insecurities You'll be popular You won't have to worry about your reputation You won't have to worry at all Not about making me happy Not about me being alright Not about me at all I'm a lot of work We both know that I'm not enough either You don't have to worry about me ruining you life When you leave It'll all be over

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The speaker is afraid of being left, and the whole poem is built around that fear. It opens with a reminder of a promise, "You promised not to leave," but what follows isn't a calm argument. The speaker lists all the ways the other person would be better off without them: no insecurities to manage, no worry about reputation, no pressure to keep someone happy. It sounds generous, but it reads more like self-punishment. The speaker seems to believe they are "a lot of work" and "not enough," and they say so as if it were simply fact.

The mood is quiet, anxious, and sad. The short, flat lines give the feeling of someone trying to stay calm while falling apart. "I'll be crushed" is stated plainly, then quickly buried under reassurance for the other person. The ending, "It'll all be over," is ambiguous. It could mean the relationship, or it could hint at something darker, and the poem leaves that uncomfortably open.

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