waiting for u — Summary

sarahDreamy

the world spins the waves crash against the shore the leaves shake in the breeze people grow apart but i'm still here waiting for you

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Sarah's poem sets one steady person against a world that never stops moving. The first lines list things in constant motion: the planet spinning, waves hitting the shore, leaves trembling in the wind. These are natural, repeating movements, calm and almost background noise. Then the poem turns to something more human and more painful: "people grow apart." Change isn't only happening in nature; it's happening between people too.

The final two lines are the heart of it. "But i'm still here / waiting for you." The word "but" marks the shift from everything drifting to one person staying put. The speaker seems loyal, perhaps a little stubborn, and clearly lonely. Nothing in the poem says who "you" is or why they're gone, which leaves the longing open for any reader to fill in.

The mood is quiet and wistful. The short lines, lowercase letters and plain words make it feel like a private thought rather than a performance, and the simplicity makes the ache feel honest.

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