raven — Summary

another day goes by without me ever seeing your smile your eyes are ocean like I could stare into them all day and night your hair used to be hazel long now they're cut, color raven can we go watch the stars till dawn and help finding each other's haven?

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Told by a speaker who misses someone they haven't seen in a while, the poem opens with a quiet ache: another day passes without a glimpse of that person's smile. The speaker remembers their eyes as ocean-like, so deep that they could look into them all day and night. That image suggests both calm and a kind of longing, as if the speaker could get lost there.

Then comes a small shift. The person's hair used to be long and hazel, but now it is cut short and raven-colored. The speaker notices the change, and it hints that time has passed or that the person is different from the one remembered. The poem ends with a gentle request: to watch the stars until dawn and help each other find a "haven," a safe place. The mood is tender, wistful, and hopeful. The speaker seems to want closeness and comfort, not just to see the person again.

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