as long as you want it — Summary

I've been thinking a lot lately about you and me I know it's not likely but can't you see how amazing it could be? I remember you saying "I'm not into that kind of thing" I just couldn't help but hoping the two of us might've been something I'll never forget the fear of being too late in my mind are still floating the words " don't worry my dear, as long as you want it, it's your fate "

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A speaker is caught in unrequited longing, turning over thoughts of someone who has already said they aren't interested. The opening lines are almost pleading: "can't you see how amazing it could be?" The speaker admits it's unlikely, yet can't let the idea go. Remembering the words "I'm not into that kind of thing," they still confess to hoping that the two of them might have become something.

The mood is wistful and a little anxious. The line about "the fear of being too late" suggests regret, as if the speaker worries a chance has slipped away. The poem ends on a comforting phrase, "as long as you want it, it's your fate," which the speaker keeps hearing in their mind. It's unclear who said it or how seriously it was meant, but the speaker seems to cling to it as a sliver of reassurance. The result feels honest and unpolished, like a private thought spoken aloud.

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