Photograph — Poem analysis

SherlockAugust 21, 2015Sad

Although you won't be mine You shall always be in my heart Even though they'll have you in their arms You've always been my baby brother from the start

I see the haunted look behind your eyes, Remembered how you were supposed to be mine. I didn't expect to see your photo today. Even though I yearned for you, there was nothing I do or say, To let me have you Luke, cherished brother of mine. Even though you are oceans away, I always thought we were two of a kind. I remember how I cherished those photographs of you, To adopt you Lucas, there was nothing we wouldn't do. It all fell apart one day, And all of your photographs were hushed away, As if they had never existed in the first place. I honestly didn't remember they were in that case. But then I opened it up and saw your innocent, little face. I wasn't sure to smile or cry in that closet place. Utter, absolute heartbreak flooded me as I looked onto the face of my presumed baby brother.

How is it possible to be so in love with just a photograph?

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A photograph is supposed to keep someone close, but in Sherlock's "Photograph" it mostly measures how far away he is. The speaker comes across a picture of a boy called Luke, "my baby brother," and the poem is the shock of that moment. Judging by the text, the family hoped to adopt him ("To adopt you Lucas, there was nothing we wouldn't do") and the plan collapsed: "It all fell apart one day." Now others "will have you in their arms," and the speaker is left holding paper.

The central idea is a grief with no proper name. Nobody has died, and there is nothing to mourn in the usual way. What has been lost is a future that was promised and then withdrawn. The quiet hinge of the poem is the word "presumed" in "my presumed baby brother." It admits that the title "brother" was an assumption, yet the reaction is "utter, absolute heartbreak." The closing question, "How is it possible to be so in love with just a photograph?", doesn't need answering, because the poem has already answered it. A photograph is all the speaker was left with.

The construction tracks this breakdown. The opening four lines are the tidiest, with "heart" rhyming against "start" and a steady, vow-like tone in "You shall always be in my heart." After that the poem loosens. Lines stretch and the rhythm turns uneven, as if the speaker has stopped counting syllables and is simply talking. Rhymes still turn up, but they feel like thoughts catching on each other, not planned effects: "today" and "say," "you" and "do," "day" and "away." The most telling run comes near the end, where "place," "case," "face," and "place" again close four consecutive lines. The repeated word is almost literally stuck, like the photographs in their box. The longest line, "Utter, absolute heartbreak flooded me...", has no rhyme at all, as though the feeling overflows the form. The single question below it stands alone and is quieter than anything before it.

The grammar of concession adds to this. "Although you won't be mine," "Even though they'll have you," "Even though I yearned for you," "Even though you are oceans away": each clause states a fact that the speaker's feeling overrides. The word "mine" is repeated too ("won't be mine," "supposed to be mine," "brother of mine"), possessive each time and each time undercut by the situation around it. The boy's names shift as well. "Luke" is used in the tender moment, while "Lucas," the fuller form, appears when the speaker remembers the effort to adopt him. It is an inference, but the longer name sounds like the one that would go on official forms.

The imagery of hiding is the most striking. The photographs were "hushed away," a word that suggests secrets and quieted children, and the passive phrasing never says who did the hushing. They end up in "that case," in a "closet place," and the family behaves "as if they had never existed in the first place." The boy is erased from the house, and with him the speaker's hope. There is also a contradiction in how the boy looks. First the speaker sees a "haunted look behind your eyes," then an "innocent, little face." A photograph can't change, so the difference must come from the viewer. The sadness in the boy's eyes may be partly the speaker's own, projected onto a still image. The line "I wasn't sure to smile or cry" admits the same doubleness, since the picture is both a gift and a wound.

The poem's significance lies in its plain honesty. It makes no attempt at polish, and its roughness fits the subject. It gives weight to a kind of loss that is easy to dismiss, love for someone the speaker never fully had and was never allowed to keep. By the end, "just a photograph" no longer sounds like a small thing. It is the only proof that the love, and the boy, were real.

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