A Little Too Sweet — Summary

Candies and chocolate tarts Satisfy your stomach But only the grin of a certain girl Can satisfy your heart

Sickly sweet, she led you on (There were no bad intentions) Honey layered to the sky Then one day you were gone

Inside jokes and friendly calls Were all that you could share She said you were like a brother And that was the first of the walls

Was she a little too sweet? Did you grasp at false hope? Sugar piled miles high It was really quite a feat

You wilted in the oven's heat You never could tell apart Flirting and friendliness Was I a little too sweet?

I'm sorry I broke your heart

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The poem is about a friendship that one person mistook for romance. For most of it, the speaker seems to address someone who fell for a girl, and the sugary imagery of candy, honey and tarts stands in for her warmth. She never meant harm, but her kindness, inside jokes and friendly calls fed hope she didn't share. When she called him "like a brother," a wall went up.

The final stanzas change the picture. The question "Was I a little too sweet?" shifts the voice into the first person, and the closing line, "I'm sorry I broke your heart," suggests the speaker is the girl herself, looking back with guilt. Judging by the imagery, sweetness has turned from a pleasure into something excessive, even smothering, like sugar piled "miles high."

The mood is gentle and rueful. The rhymes and playful food images keep it light, but underneath sits a quiet regret about how easily friendliness and flirting can be confused.

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