The Longing — Summary

strahadRomantic

The longing I hold is not for money The longing within me is not for fame The longing within me is not for power This longing is for you This longing is for your smile This longing is for your laugh This longing is for your touch, your kiss, your attention. This longing is eating me from the inside. Removing all that I am, and replacing it with a monster. A monster with green eyes and yellow teeth. A monster, that, may very well devour my very being and leave me an empty husk. Leave me a void that is capable of nothing but longing.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

The speaker begins by saying what they don't want. It isn't money, fame, or power, the things most people chase. The repeated "The longing within me is not for..." sets up a list of ordinary ambitions, and then dismisses them all. What the speaker wants is a person: their smile, their laugh, their touch, their kiss, their attention.

Then the poem turns darker. The longing stops being sweet and becomes something that eats the speaker "from the inside." The image of a monster with green eyes and yellow teeth suggests jealousy or sickness, something ugly growing where the speaker's own self used to be. The final lines are bleak: the speaker fears being left as an "empty husk," a void that can only long. The mood moves from tender and simple to desperate and haunted, showing how love that goes unanswered can feel less like a gift and more like being slowly consumed.

Read also

More by strahad

All poems
Anxiousstrahad

The green eyes

There are many monsters within me But the one that is the strongest has no shape or form save for its eyes. Its eyes are not blue or brown, they are not hazel. They are green.