Nightmare — Summary

Trapped, in what was supposed to be a dream.

My head is spinning

All I see are empty thoughts running in my head.

All I hear is my heart beat and the the voices beating at my confidence.

Sadness has dragged me into a corner with nowhere to run.

So many hands reaching out to give me some kind of salvation but I can't accept it. I won't accept it.

I feel alone, but I'm not lonely. I may be living this nightmare alone but, Ive written my own life, and I'll just have live in it.

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Nightmare begins with a trap: the speaker expected a dream and landed somewhere much darker. From there the poem piles up the pressure. Their head spins, their thoughts feel empty, and all they can hear is their own heartbeat and voices chipping away at their confidence. Sadness pushes them into a corner with nowhere to go.

What makes the poem interesting is how the speaker responds to help. Hands reach out, offering "some kind of salvation," but the speaker refuses it, and the shift from "I can't" to "I won't" sounds like a hardening of will. The ending then draws a careful line: "I feel alone, / but I'm not lonely." The speaker admits the nightmare is a solitary one, yet claims ownership of it, saying they have written their own life and will live in it.

The mood is anxious and heavy at first, then stubborn and defiant, with a hint of resignation in the final line.

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