Under a tree of maple — Poem analysis

Lost,

under this tree of maple, hands tied, hugging the rough wood. the sand rises up above my waist and thickens to strangle my crotch, what have I done to her.

leaves slowly drift down and slice open my face with their razor coated edges as they pass.

hours later I am parched, the sun suffers me and laughs as I attempt to drink the droplets of sweat, walking down my cheek.

as dry as a wooden chair, my exhaustion peaks beyond hope, the desert dismantles through my eyes.

suddenly, as gentle as a freshly blossomed petal, she calls my name from within the murky horizon, her footsteps revive my spirit.

a wondrous meander she is, a queen dressed in sparkling water, slowly leaning forward she enriches me with a gentle kiss.

water fills my body, my chest thrusts forward as the rope is torn from the tree. the sand begins to sink, again I can walk, again I am alive, again I am,

Found.

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Two single words hold this poem up like bookends: "Lost," at the top and "Found." at the bottom. The speaker never leaves the maple tree he is tied to, so the journey happens around him and inside him. The central idea is that being rescued means more than surviving. It means being recognised, and perhaps forgiven, by another person.

The opening scene is strange on purpose. A maple belongs in cool, leafy country, yet it stands in a desert with the speaker's hands bound around its trunk. "Hugging the rough wood" is a small paradox, an embrace that is also a captivity. Sand climbs to his waist and "thickens to strangle," and then comes the line that explains the landscape: "what have I done to her." It ends with a full stop, not a question mark, so it sounds less like a question than a flat confession to himself. The poem never says what he did. Judging by the imagery, the desert is less a place than a state of guilt, and leaving the offence unspoken lets that guilt fill the whole scene.

The middle stanzas turn comforting things cruel. Shade should protect, but the leaves "slice open my face with their / razor coated edges," and their slow drifting makes the injury feel patient, almost deliberate. The sun "suffers me and laughs"; "suffers" can mean tolerates, so the sky seems to watch and enjoy his misery. Hissing s-sounds run through these lines ("sand," "strangle," "slowly," "slice," "sun suffers"), like sand being poured. His thirst is made humiliating: he tries to drink his own sweat, and the droplet is personified as "walking down my cheek," a tiny journey he cannot catch. Then comes "as dry as a wooden chair," a deliberately ordinary, domestic simile. After so much hostile grandeur it shows how worn down he is, and it echoes the wood he clings to. "The desert dismantles through my eyes" is ambiguous: his sight may be breaking into mirage, or the desert may be taking him apart through what he sees.

"Suddenly," alone on its line, marks the turn. Her arrival answers the razors with softness: "as gentle as a freshly blossomed petal." She comes from a "murky horizon," which could be a mirage, and the poem leaves that open. She calls his name before she touches him, and that order seems important, because he is found when someone knows who he is. The imagery fuses woman and water. "A wondrous meander" suggests a winding river, and the inverted word order ("she is") gives it the slow dignity of an announcement. Calling her "a queen dressed in sparkling water" is a familiar image, but after so much harshness its plain reverence feels earned. The kiss is how the water enters him, so rescue and forgiveness become one gesture. Since the same pronoun appears in "what have I done to her" and "she calls my name," a reader may infer that the person he wronged is the one who saves him, though the poem never says so.

The ending reverses the opening. The sand that rose now "begins to sink," and the rope "is torn," a passive verb, as if it simply cannot hold any longer. Then comes the repeated "again": walk, alive, am. Each phrase is shorter than the last, stripping him down from action to life to bare existence. The final line stops on a comma, "again I am," so the sentence is incomplete until we reach the capitalised "Found." The grammar makes us wait for rescue, and the pairing of "Lost" and "Found" echoes the old language of grace and salvation.

Formally the poem is free verse, with no rhyme and no regular metre. Lines are short and uneven, and sentences start in lowercase even after full stops, which gives the voice a breathless, unpolished quality, like speech in delirium. The poem is worth reading for its economy and restraint. It withholds the cause of the suffering and lets sand, wood, thirst and water carry the emotion. In about thirty lines it tells a complete story of guilt and mercy, and it makes mercy feel physical.

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