SHOWER — Summary

throwaway_poetryContemplative

drip scrub sit a wet coalescence of my soul gangly, confined, soap lid shampoo on my nose My mind is loudest in that white space Time seems to wait for me outside I like the noise

But all things end even my hour long showers

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Here, a shower becomes a private retreat. The speaker lists small physical actions, "drip scrub sit," and then slips into something larger: a "wet coalescence" of the soul, as if the water gathers the scattered parts of the self into one place. The details are oddly comic and tender at once. The speaker feels "gangly," boxed in by the stall, with a soap lid and shampoo on the nose. Yet that awkwardness doesn't spoil anything.

The key line is that the mind is "loudest in that white space." Instead of quiet, the shower brings a rush of thoughts, and the speaker likes it. Time seems to "wait" outside, which suggests the world's demands are paused. The mood is cozy, reflective, and a little wistful. The ending turns gently sad. "All things end," even an hour-long shower, so the poem quietly admits that this escape is temporary and the outside world is waiting.

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