Into The Mist — Summary

I was happy before the mist came, I was kind before the mist. The mist is taking control on me, Rapping itseft around my soul. my thoughts jumble around my head screaming, I hear voices in my head yelling out my name. I know there not real but the keep getting louder and louder. The Mist in destroying my soul, Beating me down from the inside out. The mist throws me into the deep abyss of my sorrows, My fears. I try to see the end but the mist is to thick to see, so i stumble and fall, i am brused and beaten. i seem so close and yet the end is so far. and soon i have nothing left. I am falling, i am falling, I have fallen into the mist.

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The speaker describes being slowly overwhelmed by something called "the mist," which seems to stand for despair, mental distress, or a darkness that has taken over their mind. The poem opens with a simple contrast: the speaker was happy and kind before the mist arrived. Now it wraps around their soul, fills their head with jumbled thoughts, and even produces voices calling their name. The speaker knows the voices aren't real, yet they grow louder anyway, which makes the fear feel hard to control.

The feeling builds from confusion to helplessness. The speaker tries to find an end to the mist, stumbles, falls, and gets bruised, but the way out always seems just out of reach. By the final lines, repeating "I am falling" gives a sense of sinking, and the last line admits defeat. The mood is bleak, anxious, and claustrophobic. The rough, unpolished writing adds to the raw, urgent feel of someone struggling to put pain into words.

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