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Tim KongContemplative

Except that soon he won't be

What's that Boo? I said It was breakfast, a messy rush into the day. Coco-pops for her and coffee for me

"That's a dinosaur Dad, a dinosaur called Happy" Oh yeah, I said, what's he doing on your paper there

"Well, he went to the pool Dad, to have a drink, because he's thirsty" "He's the colored up one... wait Dad, I have to do the dinosaur stomp"

So she did, a little two step-half-step stomp around the kitchen, While I realized I'd forgotten to email the office about that thing

What about those, I said "Those? Those are teeny tiny feet Dad, because there's not much space on the page"

And that, what's that, I said, checking the phone for the meeting time, Is that a tree

There was a look

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A father sits through a rushed breakfast while his young daughter explains her drawing of a dinosaur. She is completely absorbed: the dinosaur is thirsty, he went to the pool, he has tiny feet because the page is small. The father keeps asking questions, but his attention is elsewhere. He thinks about an unsent email and checks his phone for a meeting time.

The poem's quiet tension comes from that gap. Her imagination is full and logical, while his replies are automatic. His last question, "Is that a tree", gets only "There was a look," and that look says everything. The speaker doesn't excuse himself, and the poem doesn't scold him either. It simply lets the moment sit there. The odd opening line, "Except that soon he won't be," hints at something fleeting, perhaps this kind of childhood attention, though the poem leaves it open. The mood is gentle, funny, and quietly guilty.

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