The Cloud of Color — Summary

The Cloud of Color was out on high, And The Cloud was a free and loving thing, Slowly, though, The Cloud faced challenges, And the color started to leave The Cloud, First red, And then green, All that was left was blue, And The Cloud continued on, Forever blue,

Forever sad.

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Timothy Jordan's poem follows a single cloud through a slow fading. At the start it is high up, free and loving, and it carries every color. Then "challenges" arrive. The poem never says what they are, which makes the loss feel like something that could happen to anyone. The colors drain away one at a time, red first, then green, until only blue remains.

The speaker sounds quiet and sorrowful, almost like someone telling a sad story without trying to fix it. Blue works two ways here: it's a color, and it's also the feeling of being blue. By the end the cloud isn't just changed, it's stuck, "forever blue, / forever sad." That final line stands alone, which makes it land hard. The mood is gentle but heavy. The poem suggests that hardship can wear down the brightness in a person, and it leaves us with that loss rather than any comfort.

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