Coffee — Poem analysis

TylerW883Romantic

You are like my morning coffee. A thought when I wake up and my energy for the rest of the day. Every warm sip I take touches my soul. It ignites a spark that keeps me going. Before I fall asleep, all I can think about is how I get to drink you in again, and taste your warm touch that soothes my body. I can’t wait to feel the rush that your warmth brings, like tiny kisses burning in me. But what I love about each day after I open my eyes, I can’t help but feel the need to make my morning coffee.

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Addressing a "you" from its very first line, "Coffee" sounds like a love poem. The speaker says, "You are like my morning coffee," and then spends the rest of the poem showing what that means: the loved one is the first thought of the day, the source of energy, the thing longed for at night. What makes the poem more interesting than a simple compliment is that the comparison keeps sliding. By the end it is hard to say whether coffee is standing in for a person or a person is standing in for coffee.

The imagery is built almost entirely from heat and touch. The sip is "warm," the touch is "warm," the rush comes from "your warmth." Fire gathers around these words too. Coffee "ignites a spark," and the final image is of "tiny kisses / burning in me." That last phrase holds pleasure and pain together, since kisses are tender and burning is not. It also describes the jolt of caffeine quite accurately, a small, quick heat spreading through the body. The senses blur as well. The speaker wants to "taste your warm touch," which turns a feeling into a flavour. And "drink you in" works two ways: it means literally drinking, and it means absorbing someone with your eyes and attention. The poem lets the ordinary phrase carry both meanings without comment.

The form is plain. There is no rhyme and no regular meter, only short, speech-like lines of a few stresses each. The poem is one unbroken block with no stanza breaks, which suits its subject, since a daily routine has no pauses built into it. Enjambment does much of the work. "Every warm sip I take / touches my soul" lets the first line finish a small action before the second line lifts it into something larger. The brevity of "touches my soul" gives it weight, though it is also the most familiar phrase in the poem, the kind of line that sounds like many other love poems.

The poem also traces a shape across a day. It begins at waking ("A thought when I wake up"), moves through "the rest of the day," arrives at bedtime ("Before I fall asleep"), and then returns to morning. Even the night is spent looking forward: the speaker's last thought is "how I get to drink you in again." The word "again" matters here, because it makes the whole poem a loop. The beloved or the coffee is the thing that begins the day and also the thing the day is quietly waiting for.

The ending is where the poem becomes most revealing. "But what I love about each day / after I open my eyes, / I can't help but feel the need / to make my morning coffee." The "But" promises a turn, and the turn is a surprise. After lines of tender address, the "you" disappears and a very practical action takes its place: *make* the coffee. The sentence is a little tangled, too. It begins with "what I love" and ends on "the need," so love and compulsion run into each other. Read this way, the final lines undercut the romance. "Keeps me going" and "I can't help but feel the need" sound less like the language of courtship than of dependence. Either the speaker loves someone the way one loves a habit, or the speaker has confessed that the habit was the real subject all along. The text supports both readings, and it does not choose.

That unsettled quality is what makes the poem worth discussing. Its subject is small, a cup in the morning, but it shows how easily the vocabulary of love and the vocabulary of craving overlap. The comparison that opens the poem looks tidy, yet by the last line it has started to wobble. A student reading closely can see a simile working as a way of understanding and then, a few lines later, starting to expose the speaker. Everything we learn about the speaker comes from the poem itself, and what it shows is someone who describes a ritual so tenderly that the ritual starts to look like the relationship.

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