21· what happened? — Poem analysis

Here's to the kids, the ones that were never heard, who were expected to become perfection, and loose themselves, their lives like fragile jars. Crack. Here's to the kids, the ones who couldn't forget the sound of the screams, he says he didn't mean to hurt you, but you've heard that too often to cry anymore, and now all that is let is a loveless pulse, can't even think anymore. Empty. Here's to the kids, that lost it all, in the burning pits of fire, the adjacent lines, blur and begin to daze you, so you loose track of time, between the drugs and drinking, where'd the years go? Gone. Here's to the kids, the ones who hoped once upon a time, before it was crushed like innocent daisies, now deprived of basic emotion, you wished for a better day, and you swore you'd give anything, so you sold your life away, to those who never cared, when all we needed was love. Destruction. Here's to the kids, the adults of this world, who grew up too quickly, and put away the fairy tales, they allowed you to dream, and laugh like a happy fool, but even the best of us forget, too late. Shrivelled. Here's to the people who pretended, who fought, who lied, who stole, who hated, who felt pain, here's to human kind. What happened?

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A toast is meant to celebrate, and "Here's to the kids" sounds at first like a cheerful opening. The poem quickly turns the form against itself. Each time the toast is raised, it is for children who were ignored, frightened, numbed or used up, and the glass is lifted over a wreck rather than a triumph. The central idea is that childhood can be destroyed from the outside, quietly and without anyone being held to account. The poem ends not with an answer but with the question that gives it its title: "What happened?"

The structure carries most of this. The poem is built from five repeated blocks, each opening with the same phrase and closing with a single word set on its own line: "Crack." "Empty." "Gone." "Destruction." "Shrivelled." Read in order, those words make a small story of decline, from a sudden break to a hollowing out, then a disappearance, a wreck, and finally a slow withering. The first block prepares the ground. The kids are "expected to become perfection," and their lives are "fragile jars," so the word "Crack" lands as the sound of something that was always going to give way under too much pressure. The one-word lines work like verdicts. They are blunt and final, and they refuse the comfort of explanation.

There is no regular rhyme or metre. The lines are short and the sentences run on, often held together by commas where full stops might be expected, which gives the voice a breathless, spilling quality. The repetition that does exist is emotional rather than musical. "Anymore" appears twice in the second block, in "too often to cry anymore" and "can't even think anymore." The echo shows a person gradually being emptied of reactions. The line "he says he didn't mean to hurt you" is the one place where a specific cause appears, but it stays a half-sentence of overheard excuse, and the poem never says who "he" is.

The imagery moves between the domestic and the apocalyptic. Jars and daisies are small, breakable, ordinary things, while "the burning pits of fire" belongs to a much larger, nightmarish world. The phrase "the adjacent lines, / blur and begin to daze you" is hard to pin down, and I read it as a blurring of vision or of time, which fits the lost years that follow ("where'd the years go?"). The botanical thread is worth following. Daisies are "crushed" in the fourth block, and the final one-word verdict, "Shrivelled," belongs to the same family of images, as if the kids were flowers that never got to open. The name "unfledged," which is all we are given for the writer, suggests something similar, since a fledgling is a young bird not yet ready to fly. That is an inference, but the poem's pictures of unfinished, damaged growth support it.

The pronouns also shift in a way that deepens the poem. It starts by speaking about "the kids," moves to "you," and then slips into "we" in the line "when all we needed was love." The speaker seems to step into the crowd they have been toasting. Then comes the paradox of the fifth block: "the kids, / the adults of this world, / who grew up too quickly." Here childhood is not just damaged but skipped, with the fairy tales put away early. The closing "too late" has the flat sound of a door shutting.

The last block breaks the pattern. The toast widens from the kids to "the people who pretended, who fought, who lied, who stole, who hated, who felt pain, here's to human kind." It is one long line with no pause, and it ends without a one-word verdict. Every earlier block had its "Crack" or "Gone," but here the poem offers no label, only the question. By making the damaged kids and the adults who damage each other part of the same human list, it suggests that the cycle belongs to everyone, and that the harm may be handed down by those who were once hurt themselves.

The poem's significance lies in this refusal to tidy things up. It is rough in places, and a few spelling slips, such as "loose" where "lose" is meant, add to the unpolished feel. Yet the repeated toast, the stacked one-word endings and the shift from "you" to "we" give it a clear shape and a real emotional pull. It speaks in the voice of someone who has stopped expecting an answer and asks the question anyway.

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