comatose — Summary

Comatose, danger, endurance These have one thing in common Him He has them But i do to He's dangerous He's comatose He's endurance I'm innocent I'm energetic I'm temporary We don't match But I'm dying Without him near I'm comatose Without his touch I'm dangerous Without him I endure in a killing pain Loneliness I mifht be different of him But without him Im the same As him

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Veronika Flynn's poem is about a speaker who is hopelessly tied to someone else. It starts with three heavy words, "comatose, danger, endurance," and says they all belong to "him." Then comes the twist: the speaker has them too. The two seem like opposites, since she calls herself innocent, energetic and temporary, while he is none of those things. Yet the poem keeps closing that gap.

The turning point is absence. Without him near, she is comatose; without his touch, she is dangerous; without him, she endures "a killing pain" that the poem names as loneliness. The qualities she first pinned on him turn out to be what she becomes when he's gone. So the final lines, "without him / I'm the same / As him," read as both a confession and a kind of surrender.

The mood is raw and aching. The short, blunt lines and plain wording make it feel like an unpolished, honest admission of dependence and hurt.

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