The Maze — Summary

Vian LouwAnxious

Running in an endless maze Fatigue- Trying to find an exit No escape- I need to escape Trapped-

There is no escape Even though its all an illusion in my mind- I know it sounds delusional but it is killing me-

There is mostly darkness This is where my inner demons roam: Fear- Insecurities- Regret- Insanity-

In the centre is a dim light Where all good things are: My happy place Love- Passion- Joy-

The darkness is growing The light is fading Im getting more and more lost There is no ....

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Vian Louw's "The Maze" describes the feeling of being trapped inside one's own thoughts. The speaker keeps running but gets nowhere, worn out and desperate for a way out. What makes it harder is that the maze isn't real. She admits it is "an illusion in my mind," and that she knows how that sounds, yet it is "killing" her all the same.

The poem splits the maze into two zones. Most of it is dark, home to fear, insecurities, regret and insanity. At the centre sits a dim light holding love, passion and joy, a "happy place" that feels close but hard to reach. The short, dash-ended lines make the speaker sound breathless and cut off.

The mood is anxious and heavy, and it gets worse as the poem goes on. The darkness grows, the light fades, and the speaker feels more lost. The ending breaks off mid-sentence ("There is no ...."), which suggests that hope is running out.

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