«I want to hide.» — Summary

I want to hide. I want to die. No one will be there when I try, Because I cry every night. And no one hears or comes in sight. And just for that I might forget. That all the people that I met. Are just too selfish too see. The very thing killing me. Is me.

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Short and raw, this poem is a confession of deep loneliness and despair. The speaker says they want to hide and even want to die, and they feel completely unheard. They cry every night, but nobody comes to check on them or notices anything is wrong. That silence seems to hurt as much as the sadness itself.

The poem then turns toward the people around the speaker, saying they are "just too selfish" to see what is happening. But the last lines shift the blame in a surprising way. The thing "killing me" is not other people at all. It is "me." That single word, standing alone as its own line, lands with a heavy thud. It suggests the speaker feels trapped by their own thoughts and self-criticism.

The mood is bleak, quiet, and painfully honest. The rhymes are simple, which makes the poem feel like a private diary entry rather than something polished. If you or someone you know feels this way, talking to a trusted person can help.

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